Howdy. Hope you are doing well. A while back I wrote this short story for an anthology and it was rejected. I took the notes the editor left and worked on a new draft. I’m planning on posting it to my online accounts, but would like a second pair of eyes to see if there are still patches to make. It’s about 9000 words so I’m not posted it here. But if anyone is interested here is a link to it through Google Drive. Be open and honest, I want to make this story as good if not as great as I can. Thank you for your time and have an amazing day.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1gewMqQRWw6UGhmLVZTMG5acFU/view?usp=sharing